Death Has Come To Take Me

Death Has Come To Take Me

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MusicLover01 By MusicLover01 Updated Jan 29, 2011

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Death is ready to take you and you can do nothing about it. You can run, but he'll find you know matter what.

Your time is up.

MusicLover01 MusicLover01 May 27, 2012
@LanceRedanican thanks for your advice im not really sure how to write poems, so this was like a first try. still thanks for the advice I'll use it on my next poems if i write any :))
LanceRedanican LanceRedanican May 27, 2012
Cool. Honestly though, this could use some more tension. I want to see struggle in poems which need it, but this is good as it is. You lacked an apostrophe at the second line for the word doesn't.