My Guardian Angel

My Guardian Angel

1 Part Story 406 Reads 45 Votes
JiyaPan By JiyaPan Completed

all of us dream of having our guardian angel.. we even have our own description's for them..well, for me this is how i see MY GUARDIAN ANGEL

SeijiKenshi SeijiKenshi Jul 10, 2012 10:58AM
great flow, like the summer winds blow. nice use of words, now everone has heard. your a great poet no everyone knows it
Chemis3 Chemis3 Jun 20, 2012 11:52AM
awww. Very cute. Flows well... and I just adore the concept. =) Well done!
JiyaPan JiyaPan Jun 19, 2012 05:34AM
@Jayden_Rayne @Miffue @mystiquemamma @OhhitzKarla @qwertyuiopenguin @LJberry thanks for reading guys!!!! hope you also read my other poems... :D
Jayden_Rayne Jayden_Rayne Jun 18, 2012 10:18PM
I think this is my favorite poem that you've written so far. I really like the desciptive language in it and the loving mood. It gives off a nice, warm feeling. :) ~Voted.
Miffue Miffue Jun 15, 2012 06:26PM
love it =) its very sweet, mainly focuses on one strong emotion and it had a good rhyming scheme =) it has simple words but it gives out the meaning strongly nonetheless =) well written =)
JiyaPan JiyaPan May 17, 2012 07:58AM
@shinichikudo09 tnx!!! pede pabasa nung stories ko? khit tagalog?