Alana's Mistake ✓

Alana's Mistake ✓

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G.S. Banks By gs_banks Completed

A young, happily married woman has a one-time affair with a guy who refuses to allow it to end and becomes obsessed with her. 
  
Alana is 22 years old, but she got married at 16 to her husband Noah, father of her sweet little girl Snow. Because they got married so young Alana sometimes wonders if she missed out on all the fun her friends seemed to be having. Noah is the only man she has ever really known, that is until she meets musician Elias Smith. 
  
Alana and Elias end up spending a reckless, wild weekend together. When it is over Alana wants to forget the whole thing and return to life with her family. 
  
But Elias has other ideas. He doesn't want it to end. Not when Alana is the one woman who has ever made him feel something. Elias wants Alana for his own, and he will stop at nothing to get her. 
  
  ***Dark suspense/thriller***
  
Along the lines of Fatal Attraction and Gone Girl.
  
  © 2017 G.S. Banks. All rights reserved.

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  • affair
  • betrayal
  • creepy
  • crime
  • danger
  • dark
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  • husband
  • love
  • lover
  • marriage
  • mysterious
  • mystery
  • obsession
  • relationships
  • sexy
  • suspense
  • thriller
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M_W_M_ M_W_M_ May 01, 2017
OMG this the best story I have ever read in my whole entire life!!!!!!!!!
Nelly054 Nelly054 May 02, 2017
Your story is sooo attractive... Very fine!!! I love Alana already and Jess too😱
JVuurEmbers JVuurEmbers Mar 08
I agree with Alana here. They aren’t quite old enough for “dear” I’m like a decade older than her. I’m not old enough for “dear”. It sounds weird and old-fashioned
xxvivianxx100 xxvivianxx100 Jun 01, 2017
Her life really does sound dull. Though no one is at fault for that.
                              Marriage is not the end of fun and youthful days, if you can learn how to enjoy the best of everything.
andsbeginning andsbeginning Apr 17, 2017
hey do you mind giving recommendations on my book because your one seems awesome
XUrbanNovelsX XUrbanNovelsX May 18, 2017
This first chapter was so good. It was well written with no mistakes of spelling and all fitted perfectly. I was so drawn in by the first sentence. Cant wait to read more! <3