The King's Ceremony

The King's Ceremony

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Cat(: By NeonChick Updated Feb 15, 2011

Friday Dever just lost her mother. She needs money since none was left. When a offer comes along of entering the King's Ceremony, a battle till death with the prize as being rich, she takes the offer. Of course, she then finds out she's the only girl in the battle, but the only element. Then there's Duke, the very  sweet and cute co-trainer she finds herself falling for. So, will she rise to win or fall to lose. Her motto? There's nothing wrong beating as long as your not cheating.

NeonChick NeonChick Jan 31, 2011
@YAdude thank yooou we went to the movies and saw green hornet.. really good lol(:
NeonChick NeonChick Jan 31, 2011
@truenotme @ehesse @YAdude thankkkks for commenting(: the second chap is up(: 
elvionina elvionina Jan 29, 2011
You have an awesome hook into your story. Simple and hard on the spot. Though you should keep you dialogue a bit shorter, or just had the character's thoughts within it!