The dragon's heart

The dragon's heart

8.8K Reads 719 Votes 21 Part Story
Alsey Grayland By alsey89 Updated Sep 22

A story about love...  and dragons.
      Trailer inside :)
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          "Why am I here?" I ask in a whisper.
            She has her head tilted up, eyes drinking the darkness that's descending from the sky. There will be a storm soon - a storm of dragons and a downpour of water, and she's going to rejoice in it.
            "Lord Aegar has chosen your family to tailor his clothing. Before you go you need to see him in his true form so you can make something outstanding for him," she explains with a tremble in her voice as I think about the old her - the person who was washed away. "It's just a glance that you need."
            And she's right. Sometimes, it takes just a glance to see a dragon.

  • dragonmate
  • dragons
  • freedom
  • immortal
  • love
  • mate
  • mortal
  • paranormalromance
  • shift
  • shifter
  • slave
  • worldinthesky
Whoa there. This is oberboard description. Unless the clouds are important to the plot, you're just flaunting your diction. As a writer, it's always tempting to do that, but not every reader out there is a human thesaurus. 😂
IsMeNadia IsMeNadia Jun 03
 #Believerbe I liked the song. I didn't see any mistakes in this chapter. It was perfectly written. Usually all first chapters start off slow, so I don't mind that. There was just enough description and everything for me to keep on reading. I did enjoy the read, so keep up the good work.
Nice. The Magic clothing that appears annoys some people. I dint know why- they can believe in shape shifters and superheroes but not magic clothing that stretches and shrinks to fit (aka Hulk)
tealeaxes tealeaxes Sep 29
I saw some 'the hobbit' in that trailer... I'm really excited for this book!
One sees lightning and hears thunder . Just FYI. Please proceed , good story
A_Dwivedi A_Dwivedi Jun 25
 #believerbc 
                              
                              What can I say? You did great. The chapter was well written and the plot just got more interesting. 
                              
                              You did good with the descriptions and rhea's perverted thoughts. I guess Aegar knows Rhea,  and if he does then things are going to get more interesting. Good work . Keep writing :)