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The Babysitter (Haunted)  (The Watty Awards 2012)

The Babysitter (Haunted) (The Watty Awards 2012)

209K Reads 3.5K Votes 10 Part Story
Hafsa By hafsa_indie Completed

A short story about what happens when Mia goes to babysit two kids one night... Well it begins with that... every story has a twist and a turn that will leave you shocked at the end. This book was consistently #1 on what's hot horror list for 6 months! If you like horror I guarantee you will enjoy this...

That is indeed a very beautiful story with twists at the right places! :D
great twist but kind of cliche.  It was good, but could have been better. Four stars.
Why would you scold yourself? if you see something you know it was real unless your on drugs or crazy.(no offense to the writer just saying bruh)
AuntieSarcasEmAmanda AuntieSarcasEmAmanda Jun 26, 2016
Okay, I'm getting a theory.....did the couple die and think THEY are being haunted, but are actually the ghosts like in, "The Others" the movie? Either way, I love your writing so far...off to finish this story. Thanks for sharing. -Amanda M. Heath
lover_hater01 lover_hater01 May 05, 2016
Oh my god..its awsm..literally my eyes are ready to jump out
Wow!!!!! I thought that family was the ghost. I was scared sooooo much.