Fire and Ice

16 Part Story 11.3K Reads 278 Votes
summerstorm By summerstorm Updated 3 years ago
A secret. A war. An eternal battle. Alantra is the proud daughter of an Ilton diplomat, a strong young woman who's hatred for the Bacchii runs deep in her veins. Tarlase is the heir to the Bacchii monarchy and will stop at nothing to see his war won. But when the two are thrown together, their individual struggles will reveal secrets thought forgotten and truths that will threaten the very existence they are both fighting so hard to win.
It's really good. I like it. You can already see what a great story it's going to be. I liked the little introduction of their god Sentrana, i think it was nice... when she was a child with her father. And the way you slowly released the appearance of their race... that was good.
                                    
                                    Definitely continue, of course i will bw reading <3
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It's really good. I like it. You can already see what a great story it's going to be. I liked the little introduction of their god Sentrana, i think it was nice... when she was a child with her father. And the way you slowly released the appearance of their race... that was good.
                                    
                                    Definitely continue, of course i will bw reading <3
                                    Post soon!!!
It's really good. I like it. You can already see what a great story it's going to be. I liked the little introduction of their god Sentrana, i think it was nice... when she was a child with her father. And the way you slowly released the appearance of their race... that was good.
                                    
                                    Definitely continue, of course i will bw reading <3
                                    Post soon!!!
It's really good. I like it. You can already see what a great story it's going to be. I liked the little introduction of their god Sentrana, i think it was nice... when she was a child with her father. And the way you slowly released the appearance of their race... that was good.
                                    
                                    Definitely continue, of course i will bw reading <3
                                    Post soon!!!
It's really good. I like it. You can already see what a great story it's going to be. I liked the little introduction of their god Sentrana, i think it was nice... when she was a child with her father. And the way you slowly released the appearance of their race... that was good.
                                    
                                    Definitely continue, of course i will bw reading <3
                                    Post soon!!!
It's really good. I like it. You can already see what a great story it's going to be. I liked the little introduction of their god Sentrana, i think it was nice... when she was a child with her father. And the way you slowly released the appearance of their race... that was good.
                                    
                                    Definitely continue, of course i will bw reading <3
                                    Post soon!!!