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Ambiguous Dreams

Ambiguous Dreams

2.8K Reads 68 Votes 7 Part Story
livexlaughxlovexo0 By livexlaughxlovexo0 Updated May 21, 2011

Kaitlyn Bates is starting her last year at high school with her twin brother Kyler. Ever heard of, "High school should be the best years of your life that you should look back on"? Well not for Kait. These past few years have been boring with her twin brother always finding ways to embarrass  her, her dad wasting his life at work, and her mother always away at the hospital with Kait's Aunt who's in a coma. But this year is no bore. There's a new boy that she unexpectedly meets who seems like a total jerk. But what Kait doesn't know is that this mystery boy is hiding a deep dark secret about his past which eventually puts her in danger. Strange events begin to happen which causes her to fear for her life. Will she survive long enough to finish off her last year and figure out his arcane secret?

RandomRachel RandomRachel Jun 15, 2011
Very good first chapter!!! You had me hooked at  "a whole lot of gorgeousness." Hahaha! I voted and I am in the process of fanning!!!
livexlaughxlovexo0 livexlaughxlovexo0 Jun 01, 2011
@raquel104 thanks! thats exactly what i need. some honest feedback. you dont sound too critical at all. i appreciate your opinion and i will get on that asap. my readers know whats best after all! :) so thank you for your comments and i hope that you will continue to read! 
mzblackstar95 mzblackstar95 May 30, 2011
so far i LOVE it !!!!!!!!!!!! sister it is out of this world and the next one !!!!!!!!!!!! keep it up plz !!!!!!!!!! and hez hairy 
VenessaJinson VenessaJinson May 26, 2011
Hmm... I Iiked it! It's a cute story!
                              Great job!
                              *voted and facebooked*
livexlaughxlovexo0 livexlaughxlovexo0 Apr 29, 2011
thank you all and @LukeTheLad i totally understand. iv'e been meaning to fix that lol :) thanks!
LukeTheLad LukeTheLad Apr 29, 2011
The humour is good but it's a bit too straight into it if you get me. Like maybe you could have built up the beginning. Still pretty good XD Voted