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CW Boys: Starting Over Book 2

CW Boys: Starting Over Book 2

432 Reads 15 Votes 6 Part Story
C. Shell By cshellauthor Updated 5 days ago

Coming Summer 2017

I can foresee Dex getting into some sticky situations with an anger management issue like this. Great foreshadowing for things to come.
I laughed out loud when I read this!! I know your talking about meeting your problems head on...but my mind totally took a walk on the dark side! That was awesome-sauce!!😂😂😂😂😂😂
Grammar issue...'the' before Dex is not needed or the remaining sentence after the comma is awkward.
I'm not sure 'especially' works in this sentence, it makes the sentence sound odd.
"Pummeled"...sorry, could just be me, but I'm not sure about this descriptive work in this sentence. Does it mean beaten, like bruised and swollen? As a reader I'm a confused by this sentence. 😕