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475 Reads 61 Votes 3 Part Story
Calista By ninja-muffins Updated Mar 05, 2012

THis story is based on "Beauty and the beast" but spy version suprises at every turn.  Trina Rose has always had a secret but with everyone thinking her dads a lunatic no one really notices her anyways but when the prince is in danger she will have to expose her secret andget over the fact that hes a total snob.  This story is going to be not what u expected at the end.  So enjoy!!

aaieqam aaieqam Jan 10, 2013
the price a massive drama queen jeez lol keep writitng
                              never give up
                              
                              xxx
                              ayesha
thunderinthesky thunderinthesky Jan 08, 2013
Its good, and as @PureBeauty said, there are a few mistakes. Be really descriptive and try to capture the characteristics of your characters. Never stop writing!
RheaKen RheaKen Jan 08, 2013
you have a unique style of writing. I get the feeling I am being drawn into a scene from a fairytale  and the person doing the leading is young girl from N.Y. with her straight forward mix no words attitude...I am loving it!!!
jcarstairs jcarstairs Jun 07, 2012
It has a lot of potential, but there are punctuation mistakes. But just keep working at it, and it'll be great :)
humz_01 humz_01 Mar 11, 2012
Aww! Feel so sorry for her.. this prince dude needs a slap in the face! Please make her punch him.. that'd b wicked ;) xx
ninja-muffins ninja-muffins Mar 07, 2012
@humz_01 the reason I don't have as much votes because I restarted the story again I did have more