Selection my way.

Selection my way.

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America Singer By freckledmyface Completed

There were a lot of things that drove me crazy about the selection so I'm rewriting it. My way.

  • america
  • aspen
  • cass
  • celeste
  • elite
  • fan
  • ficion
  • fiction
  • gerald
  • guard
  • keira
  • king
  • kriss
  • maxon
  • may
  • one
  • prince
  • princess
  • queen
  • romance
  • royal
  • selection
  • shreave
  • teen
Buzoff3320 Buzoff3320 Nov 29, 2017
I liked it, but u missed a little bit of the capitals. Otherwise it’s amazing.
h-elpless h-elpless Jan 04
Um... there not from their caste. It would be America, Five, from Carolina.
kwritingk kwritingk Jun 29, 2017
I loved when she smashed the jar, that's what I wanted her to do. A little bit of typos but it seems to be a great first page!
yehbutthole yehbutthole Jul 10, 2017
BURN THE SHATTERED GLASS AND FORM A GLASS KNIFE TO KILL HIM WITH
wintty2109 wintty2109 May 10, 2016
Okay I feel like Aspen should have an unfortunate event in which everyone he ever loved hates him so he can feel pain, or break his leg or something like that. Maybe get stripped of his title and become an 8.....I don't like him
Cavalier_Spaniel Cavalier_Spaniel Jun 21, 2016
Yeah. The hair is right but his eyes are brown and America's are green