My sexy alpha mate (finished)

My sexy alpha mate (finished)

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galii22 By galii22 Completed

16 year old Mackenzie is enjoying life when she finally meets her mate. But him being a player... Will she accept him or reject him of fall for him really fast. Alpha Damien is 17 when he meets his 16 year old mate. He will change her life

Oh my god you used TWO clichéd intros at once, the Hi My Name Is and the Something Woke Me Up intro. That is a little lacking in originality.
Clichéd Hi My Name Is intro. Also, why is it that the first thing we learn about her is her appearance? What's more important to the story, the way she looks or, you know, her actual personality?
keep_ur_head_up keep_ur_head_up Sep 14, 2015
thats like me and my bestfriend but now we are cousins by marriage lmao the way things worked out
doodlebug200117 doodlebug200117 Jul 09, 2015
I literally pulled up a picture of a girl before reading this and she has dirty blonde hair and blue eyes
KawaiiBerries KawaiiBerries Jun 06, 2015
I thought they had 1 week before school. Then she says school's tomorrow...
                              Perhaps shopping itself took a week... :)
Readeraas Readeraas May 17, 2015
So weird because as me being a werewolf this book will have it's flaws right girls