Fantasizing

Fantasizing

470K Reads 17.3K Votes 33 Part Story
Tania Junell By TJunell Completed

Zen is not the most known or boldest person, but she never backs down. Coping with the death of her mother, her life continues to grow even more complicated day by day. As she survives the harsh streets of Chicago, she meets someone that might just change her life.

    key_12 key_12 Jun 24
    That seem sketchy. If that was my momma I would want to see a body they better show me her body. What if it was somebody else and they made a mistake.
    Their mom is an queen pin trying to get out the game that is my guess
    janay123 janay123 Mar 08, 2015
    I don't know what kind of hospital this is that they won't allow you to see your loved ones until they get to the morgue smh.
    mtu_nzuri mtu_nzuri Feb 20, 2015
    Since when do they not let you see the body? What hospital is this?? Eff that I would've went crazy if they ain't let me see my momma body.  Woulda pushed right passed the doctor to go to her room.
    TracytheGEMINI TracytheGEMINI Oct 12, 2014
    I just started reading and im already inlove with it! Not with the situation but the way u wrote it.. def got my vote
    HerbanLegend HerbanLegend Feb 15, 2014
    Great beginning, emotional, descriptive and powerful. I liked your emotive descriptions.