We have all seen Percy and his meetings and introductions with mortals, demigods, half-breeds and enemies but now its time to turn the table. Its time to see those encounters through other perspectives.
The story was pretty cliche, but I can't really say anything because I write cliche stories all the time. But a lot of things weren't capitalized, and they should've been. Also, you didn't really manage to get their personalities right.
Okay, Annabeth? There is this canon ship called 'Caleo'. I need you to forget setting Leo and Jenny up, and ship Caleo as hard as us.
Just say that they drool when they sleep.Wow,that came out more stalker-ish than I thought
Oh so she's a daughter of Dionysus… wait Bacchus sounds closer, with his insanity
Cause, you can just tell that stuff from a single conversation with him.
If this isn't Percy or Thomas Brodie-Sangster then they lie.