Caged Like an Animal

8 Part Story 26.2K Reads 571 Votes
A. S. Giles By AlfieTimewolf Updated 9 months ago
Kris had been your normal, average day adolescent teen - besides the fact that she was the only werewolf in her family, and was hated for it. She gets sick of being treated like a monster and so runs away from her family, only to wake up in a cage. She doesn't know what's happening to her. Or Where she is. Or What they plan to do with her.
Woah, that big chunk of text there almost choked me, you might want to cut that down by, like, a lot, maybe?
                                    
                                    Trying a bit hard, are we? Who're you trying to impress? You need to edit this (a lot), it's almost forced out.
This sounds awful for her to be caged like that but I love it and you have some spelling errors
Uuuuuppppppdddddddaaaaaaaatttttttteeeeeeee sssssssssssoooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn ppppppppplllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssseeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!! :,(
Oooooooo spelling mistake..... Its looking pretty baaaaaad ....
This was a good chapter, before I go to the 2nd chapter I will like to ask, hoe do you get your ideas?
This is really good. You kept me interested! This is definitely different from your average werewolf story. Beside a few minor errors, this is awesome.