Between You and Me (George Weasley Love story)

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Jada/Avery By random_nerd34 Updated 3 years ago
Giselle Natalie Davison has two mischievous best friends that are like family to her, but after the Basilisk attacks at Hogwarts she is transferred to Beauxbatons Academy of Magic. She returns two years later and one of the twins start to see her differently, what will happen to the old friends? Could it be love?
Loved it. Just a quick pointer seeing as my last comment was quite long (I'm so sorry about that!); make sure you include some original ideas and events. 
                                    
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                                    I hope this has given you some help, and I apologise if my constructive critisism seems picky! Keep up the good work, I'll definately continue reading ;)
Loved it. Just a quick pointer seeing as my last comment was quite long (I'm so sorry about that!); make sure you include some original ideas and events. 
                                    
                                    You want your story to stick out from the rest of the millions of fan fictions, and one of the best was of doing that is to make it memorable. Give the reader something to think about, like a unique event/character/relationship.
                                    
                                    I hope this has given you some help, and I apologise if my constructive critisism seems picky! Keep up the good work, I'll definately continue reading ;)
Loved it. Just a quick pointer seeing as my last comment was quite long (I'm so sorry about that!); make sure you include some original ideas and events. 
                                    
                                    You want your story to stick out from the rest of the millions of fan fictions, and one of the best was of doing that is to make it memorable. Give the reader something to think about, like a unique event/character/relationship.
                                    
                                    I hope this has given you some help, and I apologise if my constructive critisism seems picky! Keep up the good work, I'll definately continue reading ;)
Loved it. Just a quick pointer seeing as my last comment was quite long (I'm so sorry about that!); make sure you include some original ideas and events. 
                                    
                                    You want your story to stick out from the rest of the millions of fan fictions, and one of the best was of doing that is to make it memorable. Give the reader something to think about, like a unique event/character/relationship.
                                    
                                    I hope this has given you some help, and I apologise if my constructive critisism seems picky! Keep up the good work, I'll definately continue reading ;)