The Last Star: A Lost Constellation

The Last Star: A Lost Constellation

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「 Lumi 」 By astrophile Updated Jul 08

[ON HOLD; MIGHT BE UNPUBLISHED]

Dearest Aurelia,
  
  I send my deepest condolences for the deaths of all your closest relatives, many of which I am responsible for. Without them, that leaves you as the last member of the Sanctus species, and I would hate for you to remain ever so lonely. Do not worry, dear. I will send someone to take care of you, too.
  
  Best Wishes,
  
  - Victor Frost

paulapdx paulapdx Jul 19
Oooh, sounds like she's going to need A LOT more training, lol.
fated- fated- Jul 10
Crows are a bad omen. I knew that note wouldn't be pleasant as soon as that Devil bird swooped in. With all that tension and then to end with Aurelia and Anthony racing to the kitchen, I can tell that this will attempt to mess with my emotions. I like it.
hemophile hemophile Apr 18
OMG YASSS!! <3 <3 THIS WAS SO GOOD, LUMI! I love the playfulness between Anthony and Aurelia. <3
AllThingsPI AllThingsPI Apr 19
Yay! 
                              
                              Thank you Lumi, and I'm happy to help with this whenever you need it!
Is there a specific name for the machine? Just something to look into if you haven't. :-]
Not sure about the necessity of the comma after 'was'. I usually only put commas before and if and follows an independent clause. But tat's just me. I've seen plenty of rules broken before. :-]