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The Last Star: A Lost Constellation

The Last Star: A Lost Constellation

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「 Lumi 」 By astrophile Updated May 18

Dearest Aurelia,
  I send my deepest condolences for the deaths of all your closest relatives, many of which I am responsible for. Without them, that leaves you as the last member of the Sanctus species, and I would hate for you to remain ever so lonely. Do not worry, dear. I will send someone to take care of you, too.
  Best Wishes,
  - Victor Frost

hemophile hemophile Apr 18
OMG YASSS!! <3 <3 THIS WAS SO GOOD, LUMI! I love the playfulness between Anthony and Aurelia. <3
AllThingsPI AllThingsPI Apr 19
                              Thank you Lumi, and I'm happy to help with this whenever you need it!
aclockworkangel aclockworkangel 3 days ago
Is there a specific name for the machine? Just something to look into if you haven't. :-]
aclockworkangel aclockworkangel 3 days ago
Not sure about the necessity of the comma after 'was'. I usually only put commas before and if and follows an independent clause. But tat's just me. I've seen plenty of rules broken before. :-]
Vintaginity Vintaginity May 19
I love how you started the chapter with this and also included it in the middle of the chapter as well.
galaxi- galaxi- May 03
I don't know why I didn't read this when I first met you. Well done.