Ninja Tales

Ninja Tales

2K Reads 27 Votes 8 Part Story
Tanu Khemani By iluvreading04 Updated Sep 25, 2011

Jasper is a ninja. He has to choose between his beloved girlfriend, Daphne and his work. Love Vs. Justice. Gonna be fun right?

JoshHaggard JoshHaggard Mar 17, 2011
Awesome story. I like de way u describe everything, it really makes you feel like you're there. It was very interesting, i enjoyed reading it.....and i love ninjas
Embracee Embracee Mar 16, 2011
Naw. This is so awesome. :)
                              Ahaha i like the part... 'Well. I'm a ninja.' - Ninja's to dominate! 
                              I will continue to read this and comment more at the end!
tianajade tianajade Mar 06, 2011
An interesting start. Some parts are a little fast paced, and some parts need more description. Your writing style needs some work, as well. A few grammar and punctuations errors, too. It sounds like an interesting storyline, though (: Overall, a nice start. Keep writing!
iluvreading04 iluvreading04 Mar 04, 2011
@CorNicFer666  yes, i LOVE ninjas! except tht its on hold, cuz i have yet to complete where the mind is with fear! =| =P but thnks for reading! =D
CorNic CorNic Mar 03, 2011
Ahahahah XD love the very orginal concept XD don't ou just love ninjas ? They make everything better :) very good keep it coming!
Laaniiie Laaniiie Jan 29, 2011
This is a good start, I want to read more :D
                              Please upload soon!