Jasper is a ninja. He has to choose between his beloved girlfriend, Daphne and his work. Love Vs. Justice. Gonna be fun right?
Awesome story. I like de way u describe everything, it really makes you feel like you're there. It was very interesting, i enjoyed reading it.....and i love ninjas
Naw. This is so awesome. :)
Ahaha i like the part... 'Well. I'm a ninja.' - Ninja's to dominate!
I will continue to read this and comment more at the end!
An interesting start. Some parts are a little fast paced, and some parts need more description. Your writing style needs some work, as well. A few grammar and punctuations errors, too. It sounds like an interesting storyline, though (: Overall, a nice start. Keep writing!
@CorNicFer666 yes, i LOVE ninjas! except tht its on hold, cuz i have yet to complete where the mind is with fear! =| =P but thnks for reading! =D
Ahahahah XD love the very orginal concept XD don't ou just love ninjas ? They make everything better :) very good keep it coming!
This is a good start, I want to read more :D
Please upload soon!