Loving You To Death (ON HOLD)

Loving You To Death (ON HOLD)

1.6K Reads 37 Votes 10 Part Story
Amy :) By XXamzXX Updated Jul 19, 2012

Is it possible for two complete opposites to fall in love? New girl,madison has always been the good girl but when she moves to Florida,she wants all that to change. She doesn't want to be the freak that everyone picks on. Carter,the bad boy slowly pushes his way into Madisons new life. But what happens when maddy gets too close to Carter? What happens when he starts to put her life at risk? What happens when the good girl and the bad boy fall in love?

pinkgirlrox98 pinkgirlrox98 Dec 10, 2011
wow good work luv it like seriously i want to know how schoo, goes so yeah i'm just going to cotiue reading 
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Junkie43 Junkie43 May 19, 2011
A few grammer mistakes but I like where your going. Try to type your story on Word, but if you dont have Word try reading over your story or find an editor. I like it though!
scribbleR scribbleR May 25, 2010
no offense but i think you still need to edit more... sure caps and spaces but spelling and proofreading too. tell me when you upload again please!!.
HollylLouisel94 HollylLouisel94 Mar 21, 2010
ITs goood x You should keep writing it. x
                              
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mylifeisaverage mylifeisaverage Mar 21, 2010
I like it, just remember to put caps in and spaces. It's annoying to find places where there are not space where there should be. It's my pet peeve:) Otherwise your story looks pretty good!