Don't Look Down

2 Part Story 77 Reads 8 Votes
Megan Christine By MeganChristine1 Updated 3 years ago
Trey Is My Bestfriend And I Would Do Anything For Him. Even Go To Florida To Meet His Parents For The Whole Summer. While We're There, We Come Across An Adventure That Could Save The World. We Could Help Stop Sir Hamelton From Blowing Up Earth. But, It's Not Easy, Nor Is It A Short Trip. We Could Get Hurt Or Even Worse, Die.
Hmmm, interesting first chapter. You kept me interested and feeling sorry for how her family was. Just a little pet peeve that's nagging at me "ok" should either be "OK" or "okay" sorry :p But other than the minor grammatical things I think your story and writing style have good potential C:
Hmmm, interesting first chapter. You kept me interested and feeling sorry for how her family was. Just a little pet peeve that's nagging at me "ok" should either be "OK" or "okay" sorry :p But other than the minor grammatical things I think your story and writing style have good potential C:
Hmmm, interesting first chapter. You kept me interested and feeling sorry for how her family was. Just a little pet peeve that's nagging at me "ok" should either be "OK" or "okay" sorry :p But other than the minor grammatical things I think your story and writing style have good potential C:
Hmmm, interesting first chapter. You kept me interested and feeling sorry for how her family was. Just a little pet peeve that's nagging at me "ok" should either be "OK" or "okay" sorry :p But other than the minor grammatical things I think your story and writing style have good potential C:
Hmmm, interesting first chapter. You kept me interested and feeling sorry for how her family was. Just a little pet peeve that's nagging at me "ok" should either be "OK" or "okay" sorry :p But other than the minor grammatical things I think your story and writing style have good potential C:
Hmmm, interesting first chapter. You kept me interested and feeling sorry for how her family was. Just a little pet peeve that's nagging at me "ok" should either be "OK" or "okay" sorry :p But other than the minor grammatical things I think your story and writing style have good potential C: