Chocolate Eyes I Craved For

Chocolate Eyes I Craved For

937 Reads 13 Votes 5 Part Story
Rhanel Candia By RhanCandia Updated Jan 30, 2011

Your eyes are the sweetest chocolates I ever craved for. Ever. I kept craving for. Forever. The sweetest chocolate eyes I could ever crave for.

RhanCandia RhanCandia Jan 29, 2011
@techdockdotcom lol. id appreciate it more if you read the whole story. there are just 3 chapters. and it's kinda short. please comment. and be honest! i want to improve my writing. :)
RhanCandia RhanCandia Jan 29, 2011
@Meimeisherry thanks. i thought it wud suck. it's kinda selfish the way I took advantage of the story being first person. :) please be honest and help me improve my writing. :) *hugs
RhanCandia RhanCandia Jan 28, 2011
@exon911 thanks. i'll try to work it up tonight. :) hopefully, it's ready by tomorrow. :)