Abbernathy and the Cat Kingdom

Abbernathy and the Cat Kingdom

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OctaviaLocke By OctaviaLocke Updated Feb 05

One girl. Two cats. A world full of adventure.
      
      Abbernathy Tells was a twelve year old girl who preferred the companionship of her two cats and a dying tree over others her age. On her thirteenth birthday, a horrible tragedy takes everything away, and young Abby is thrust into a world on the brink of war. With just her two cats, she embarks on a journey to unravel the mysteries behind the magical kingdom of Aelurus, while trying to cope with loss, loneliness, and the butterflies that come from a certain boy's touch.
      
      This is Abbernathy and the Cat Kingdom.
      
      
      
     *Welcome. Please be sure to leash your dog(s).*
    
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EAGerard EAGerard Feb 06
 #RebelBC 
                              Is this a POV change? Or were we always in the guard's POV? It seems a bit confusing to the other readers as well. Maybe try to work into the above paragraphs hints that it's the guard's POV.
SoccerBound SoccerBound 2 days ago
 #rebelbc My reaction to this first paragraph is that it's a mouthful. There are so many descriptors that by not ingraining even one sentence can ruin the entire image in your head.
ALJwrites ALJwrites 7 days ago
This is a great start. I can't wait to find out what happens
EAGerard EAGerard Feb 06
 #Rebelbc
                              could they be the two cats from the summary? Very interesting...
Liliixoxo Liliixoxo Feb 07
 #rebelbc 
                              
                              I’m enjoying the sense of urgency you’re creating!
ALJwrites ALJwrites 7 days ago
I love a guy who does the right thing on instinct like that 😍