Abbernathy and the Cat Kingdom

Abbernathy and the Cat Kingdom

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Octavia Locke By OctaviaLocke Updated Mar 13

One girl. Two cats. A world full of adventure.
      
      Abbernathy Tells was a twelve year old girl who preferred the companionship of her two cats and a dying tree over others her age. On her thirteenth birthday, a horrible tragedy takes everything away, and young Abby is thrust into a world on the brink of war. With just her two cats, she embarks on a journey to unravel the mysteries behind the magical kingdom of Aelurus, while trying to cope with loss, loneliness, and the butterflies that come from a certain boy's touch.
      
      This is Abbernathy and the Cat Kingdom.
      
      
      
     *Welcome. Please be sure to leash your dog(s).*
    
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  • anthropomorphic
  • cats
  • epic
  • fantasy
  • fantasy-romance
  • fantasyadventure
  • fantasycreatures
  • fiction
  • highfantasy
  • kingdom
  • magic
  • magical
  • romance
  • swordandsorcery
  • tragedy
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  • youngadult
  • youngadultfantasy
mahitha- mahitha- Mar 24
 #rebelbc
                              
                              Oh my these descriptions were beautiful! But was the cat wearing a cloak?
MaryFahey MaryFahey Apr 18
Very exciting start. I hope the two little kittens land where they'll be treated well.
I saw the loyalty in Lain's word. 
                              please make the Queen safe 🙀🙀
RLM915 RLM915 Jun 14
Maybe he shouldn’t be bellowing that...I’m still getting a feel for everything, but I get the feeling they’re trying to do this at least somewhat discreetly.
I really like that last line. You could phrase it as "Feign's army would bring a storm," since they aren't quite there yet and all. But its a good sentence, I wouldn't suggest you change it more than that.
This is a fantastic opening, with lots of action and character-defining moments. I could complain for hours about how Wattpad writers can't manage a good opening, but you've done splendidly.