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Recognizing Her Mate

Recognizing Her Mate

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MelisaJ95 By MelisaJ95 Completed

1st of Dominant Mates Series
Emmaline didn't want to be mated. She wanted to study. She had ambitions. She didn't want a mate. They were all possessive, jealous and stuck in the middle ages. To them, females were reduced to having two functions only, be a mate and a mother. She hoped to never find hers.
Callan is the alpha of the Moonstone Pack, reputed to be the most feared and biggest of all packs. He was a merciless killer to those who betrayed him and who tried to harm his pack. He was slowly letting the darkness take over him. His only salvation was his mate. He had lost a lot in his life. He needed his mate and once he had her, nothing would stop him from possessing her.

MarvelousMaReesha MarvelousMaReesha Nov 30, 2016
Ok seriously I LOVED the way you ended this chapter!  And your writing style out isn't to shabby either.  Only b thing I'd recommend is breaking the paragraphs up a bit.
MarvelousMaReesha MarvelousMaReesha Nov 30, 2016
An interesting concept.  I feel like someone that close to losing themselves wouldn't desire to change or find someone to save them.  They would be content with who they are.
Don't think your parents could do anything, he is the alpha.
MarvelousMaReesha MarvelousMaReesha Nov 30, 2016
How does he know its his daughter.  I think this part would be better if he shook his hand said nothing and slipped by to her.
CaribbeanMinx CaribbeanMinx Aug 07, 2016
Wow.. Umm.. Word of advice, don't stop now, continue running
So, I read the third book first before thos and now I'm payimg tje price by accidentally knowing their ending :(