Change

Change

34 Reads 2 Votes 1 Part Story
Kailani By Kailani Completed

What if you could spend the last few minutes of your life to change a few minutes of your past. It would change everything. What would you change? Would it make a difference? Marilyn Auria is faced with the reality of this choice as the man she loves, Zeitler, works to take over the world. She's caught in a catastrophic fire, and forfeits the last seven minutes of her life to change seven minutes of her past. But what is change really? Will it change anything at all?

  • back
  • change
  • marilyn
  • minutes
  • nathier
  • seven
  • time
  • zeitler
Mi4l0v3sy0u Mi4l0v3sy0u Mar 04, 2012
@Kailani thanks for answering my questions, but on the other hand your story is so good. I LOVED IT. <3
Kailani Kailani Mar 04, 2012
@fallen5angel I wanted to keep Nathier more in the mystery. Don't know why. I can't find the missed three minutes?