Dauntless Devotions

Dauntless Devotions

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Becky By sheo_fourtris_ Updated Sep 02, 2014

[I WROTE THIS IN 2013/8TH GRADE DONT JUDGE] What if the ending of Divergent was different? What if there was no Abnegation/Erudite war? What if Tris and Tobias had a chance to lead a (somewhat) normal, Dauntless life? What if they could accomplish things they were never able to do in Insurgent of Allegiant? What if they lived their lives the way they REALLY wanted to? 




 All character/setting credits to Veronica Roth. Except for Bunny. She's mine.

JadaMahr JadaMahr Jul 01
I'm sorry but I do not see him do it say any of this stuff...not happy with the story so far js
OMFG!!! NOOOOOOO, FOUR, PLEASEEEEEE! IF TRIS IS WITH URIAH, ILL TAKE HER PLACE!! Jk, I'm only 12 yrs old. BUT NOOOOO, dont juuump!
NOOOO! tris and four are supposed to be a thing! A BIG THING 😭😭😭😜😂😂
Lovepug05 Lovepug05 Jun 29
He doesn't like Christina because he doesn't want to share Tris
Well I'm not in erudite but I sure as heck know This is your life
Lovepug05 Lovepug05 Jun 29
I beleive to all of you flipping out he might just be using sarcasm