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Dauntless Devotions

Dauntless Devotions

2M Reads 42.9K Votes 102 Part Story
Becky By sheo_fourtris_ Updated Sep 02, 2014

[I WROTE THIS IN 2013/8TH GRADE DONT JUDGE] What if the ending of Divergent was different? What if there was no Abnegation/Erudite war? What if Tris and Tobias had a chance to lead a (somewhat) normal, Dauntless life? What if they could accomplish things they were never able to do in Insurgent of Allegiant? What if they lived their lives the way they REALLY wanted to? 




 All character/setting credits to Veronica Roth. Except for Bunny. She's mine.

JadaMahr JadaMahr Jul 01, 2016
I'm sorry but I do not see him do it say any of this stuff...not happy with the story so far js
DauntlessQueen_333 DauntlessQueen_333 Jul 10, 2016
OMFG!!! NOOOOOOO, FOUR, PLEASEEEEEE! IF TRIS IS WITH URIAH, ILL TAKE HER PLACE!! Jk, I'm only 12 yrs old. BUT NOOOOO, dont juuump!
Lovepug05 Lovepug05 Jun 29, 2016
He doesn't like Christina because he doesn't want to share Tris
LoverOfDystopia LoverOfDystopia Jun 24, 2016
Well I'm not in erudite but I sure as heck know This is your life
This sounds like Al's POV. Don't worry guys she made a mistake this is Al's POV not Four's😀
cryXbvby cryXbvby Jul 31, 2016
I read this when I was really into divergent like two years ago and now I'm rereading it and I remember how heart broken I was when Tobias said that 😂