The Girl in the Violet Dress

The Girl in the Violet Dress

563 Reads 23 Votes 1 Part Story
Rebekah By QueenofArts Completed

Dad. That word means nothing to me anymore. Nothing other than disappointment, lies and betrayal. Nothing more than haunting
memories, and a broken heart. Amazing cover by ChrIDreams on inkpop.com - thank you!

  • abuse
  • broken
  • dad
  • dress
  • free
  • girl
  • heart
  • rebekah
  • sad
  • violet
  • wrong
spArrowtree spArrowtree Jul 06, 2012
wow...powerful...this actually makes me speechless...which means you did a great job...very sad and unfortunate though :(
SabrinaLouise SabrinaLouise Jun 17, 2012
I love the emotions!  I would write more but I have a very hurt wrist.  :(. One thing that was a tad confusing was sorting between what was real-time and what was the letter... Maybe you could italicize the letter?    And...I love the cover, it's quite beautiful.
Ashley_C Ashley_C Mar 04, 2012
This is really good!
                              
                              Great description! The plot kept me captivated! You're an excellent writer!
CarysJones85 CarysJones85 Feb 29, 2012
I still really love this story and have voted for it (though I've no idea how the ranking system works on here... Hope it helps! : )