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Princess of the Rogues

Princess of the Rogues

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Chloe Johnson By ChloePJ Completed

Jennifer's life has never been easy. She has never had a childhood to call her own. Her father is a vile, evil man who is King of the Rogues. She is caught in a world she doesn't want. She fights what her father wants from her with her own conscience. Her name is tarnished. She is the daughter of a killer. She is the Princess of the Rogues.

15rscooby 15rscooby Jan 18
Generally it would be best to avoid having the mc just explain what they look like but its reasonably well written so its fine. Just try not to use 'I am' every time as a sentence starter
longnamed_soccergirl longnamed_soccergirl Feb 29, 2016
OMG she should fall in love with Jackson and be his mate (I haven't read destiny yet) but plot twist Oliver and Ellie wouldn't like it but like jack would fight for her or something lol sorry just trying to guess
15rscooby 15rscooby Jan 18
Well its nice to have some insight on the politics of the werewolfs before the book starts. Most books just leave you to figure it out yourself so even though its generally the same, sometimes it can be a bit confusing
ArkansasDragon ArkansasDragon Mar 08, 2016
Sigh, did you actually photoshop Katniss onto the Iron Throne for a cover?
15rscooby 15rscooby Jan 18
Nice start overall, good prologue. And btw incase u haven't noticed I'm an bit of a critic. If u don't want me to point out errors and give improvements like I have been, please tell me and I will stop
VHThompson VHThompson Apr 19, 2016
It's interesting...I like it's uniqueness. I can't wait to see what more you have for us readers!