The Luna Cycle: Book One

The Luna Cycle: Book One

3.9K Reads 158 Votes 12 Part Story
Rebecca Leigh By RLeighGale Updated Jun 29, 2012

Dominated by a fear of cataclysm, the great, cyclical Wave is worshiped as a Cleansing by the ever-pious Tertancian citizens. But when new ideals and desires supersede all else, the truths behind the Wave cannot stay hidden. The spread of knowledge cannot be damned, even by the greatest of forces.

  • apocalypse
  • moon
  • rebels
RLeighGale RLeighGale Jun 15, 2012
@loviedovy12 very glad you've enjoyed this so far :) And my book cover will hopefully be something like how it is :)
loviedovy12 loviedovy12 Jun 15, 2012
Great description.  This is crazy god, and a great beginning.  I will definitely continue because THIS IS AMAZING!  I would probably read this as a published book, but not 100% sure yet.  I will read on and tell you.  By the way, will that cover be your real book cover?
onepieceofrainbow onepieceofrainbow Apr 24, 2012
I got cut off there! As I was saying, this is wonderful work, and you are an excellent writer! I will definitely be reading on and enjoying it, although it may take me some time. I hope my suggestions were at all helpful, and not lame, as I sometimes fear, haha.
janefoxx janefoxx Apr 22, 2012
Nice beginning! I like how you started the story. :) I like your descriptions! :) they are very realistic and detailed. Maybe you should put the letter thingie in italics or something? Because it gets a bit confusing when it starts and when it stops. Just thought you should know. ;)
RLeighGale RLeighGale Apr 21, 2012
@BlurryWords Thanks! I will soon be querying publishers with this novel. I only have nine chapters up, but I have a total of 16 C:  I'm really proud of it so far, so I hope you enjoy it :) Hopefully you'll see it, and it's sequels and prequels, on the shelves!
SissaRomanova SissaRomanova Apr 21, 2012
Awesome staaaart, have you considered putting it up for the Awards? :)