The Hero and the Keeper

The Hero and the Keeper

217 Reads 12 Votes 5 Part Story
Jenna By Zigzagzable Updated Mar 14, 2012

Tare and Arin are twins growing up in a comfortable state of existence, totally and completely unaware of life existing out of the Tri-cities. Little did they know that they would suddenly find themselves thrust into a world that forces them into a fight for their lives against everything they have ever known and would take their seemingly unbreakable bond to the limit.

  • fighting
  • freedom
  • future
  • hero
  • keeper
Zigzagzable Zigzagzable Mar 09, 2012
@JustOnEmOrEgRl I suppose my wording wasn't that specific in that regard. Yep, the striking woman and the young woman are two different people :) I'll actually edit that as soon as I get a chance. Thanks for the feedback! :D
JustOnEmOrEgRl JustOnEmOrEgRl Mar 09, 2012
Nice prologue. Great suspense :) I'm a little confused though. You write that the young woman follows the others out into the cold, yet she is still there talking to Jerred? Or is it the "intense-looking woman" who stays and speaks with him? I like it, I'm just a little confused.
sssparrow sssparrow Mar 08, 2012
This is a compelling way to start a novel. Really forces you into the protagonist's shoes.
Zigzagzable Zigzagzable Mar 08, 2012
@KSKreissl Thanks :) It's weird, but finding quotes are actually the hardest part, haha!
KaseyHolmes KaseyHolmes Mar 08, 2012
Like the quote you started this piece off. Going to go continue reading! :)