Race to the end

Race to the end

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Heather Potton By HPottonSauceXP Updated Jul 25, 2012

(Watty Awards 2012 ) Years into the future, after the human race has killed itself off, a new race of homo sapiens evolve. The homo expectros. They are more advanced in intelligence and skill than the homo sapiens, but they have yet to develop feelings. At the moment, that act like robots, without emotion. Soon things start to change and the 10th generation evolves feelings, love, friendship, sadness and hate. Will these obsticles improve the races chance of survival or will it cause them to become extinct like their ancestors?
Tami is one of the smartest in her hub. She is superior in electronics and forensic. Ribo is her rival, a genius at medicine and astrophysics. Their intelligence cause many conflicts, but soon they evolve their feelings and notice each other more than before. Could this lead to their destruction? Embri the expert in chemistry, wills them to cause catastrophe, knowing that with them gone she can twist the society around her little finger.

Will this new master race survive or will it destroy itself?

  • estinct
  • extinct
  • extinction
  • future
  • new
  • race
  • time
SparxsII SparxsII Jun 20, 2015
Oh. AH lawd the scidi and the dystopian elements are so nicely integrated tht I thinks this is published!!!! I love the idea with the journal and I can't WAIT To get to this next chapter!!!
Bambi_Rivers Bambi_Rivers Apr 10, 2012
The last line is perfect and really packs a punch. It's so strange, a green sun but points like that is what makes this story interesting (: I love how even the way Tami speaks makes her sound not completely human. Great job!
ReadinCosILoveIt ReadinCosILoveIt Apr 10, 2012
I thought i'd check out your other works, and wow! This seems sooo original! I can't wait to carry on!
KatieeSpoon KatieeSpoon Mar 13, 2012
@HPottonSauceXP You're welcome :) If you want to check out my book that would be really great...haha no I'm joking xD
HPottonSauceXP HPottonSauceXP Mar 13, 2012
@KatieeSpoon Thanks, I just wanted to see if I should write in a different way, but thanks :P
KatieeSpoon KatieeSpoon Mar 13, 2012
@HPottonSauceXP Hmm only if you think it needs to change. In me opinion I don't think you should change anything, it's really good the way it is. Also you're the author so you should make the decisions :)