The Noise

The Noise

500 Reads 24 Votes 1 Part Story
Eddie Pritchett By Macabreprince Completed

Lila and her band get invited to play a gig at a mysterious strangers house.

  • demon
  • gore
  • music
  • personality
  • split
Mamaquinlin0522 Mamaquinlin0522 Nov 27, 2013
Great story as always. one more to go an i have read all your storys
BabyLianLoveBigDaddy BabyLianLoveBigDaddy Sep 25, 2013
omg! :O I feel paranoid now. thnk goodness I have my big daddy. gosh mr pritchett you are so good with this. I will share all your books to my classmates tomorrow so you will get more votes :)
- - Aug 21, 2013
I thought that was amazing and surprisingly unique! I loved it! :)
Max_Isabelle Max_Isabelle Jun 24, 2013
Good start, but i guess you forgot the use of comma and period. Some of the sentences are straight, and it would make the readers not to feel the thrill more. You should work on that. Great story by the way. Creepy stories but good. :)