Love/Hate Relationship {COMPLETED}

Love/Hate Relationship {COMPLETED}

65.6K Reads 990 Votes 47 Part Story
MrsLove14 By MrsLove14 Completed

Well ..Lets Just Say They Have A Love/Hate Relationship ..

kasandra_lassy kasandra_lassy Jul 13, 2016
wow! your story line is very interesting I love your slang and you style but your grammar needs improvement. I advise you to use google docs to wright out your story then post on wattpad your story is very nice.
MrsLove14 MrsLove14 Apr 13, 2014
@maymelons - Hiya, thanks for the feedback. This was the first story I had ever written on here so the grammar/spelling/punctuation was quite bad lol. Hopefully you enjoy the rest of the story and don't forget to check out my other stories :) xx
maymelons maymelons Apr 06, 2014
@sofieschoice1 Instead of bashing on other peoples work, tell them how to improve. It really crushes someone's spirit to see a negative comment like that
maymelons maymelons Apr 06, 2014
The story is nice, but there are a lot of spelling and grammar errors. It's no fun for the reader if there are so many mistakes, no matter how good the storyline is. Word of advice, use periods instead of ...s cause it makes it look way more professional.
katyfoster katyfoster Jan 10, 2013
Jheeeeze I love it alreadyy and their lives are soo peak like seriouslyy
girl14_ girl14_ Sep 19, 2012
I like it, but it has a lot of Grammar mistakes. I think you should keep  writing,because the story is really good!!!!!!!!:)