The Heart of Life Doesn't Beat

The Heart of Life Doesn't Beat

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whatever you want it to be, babe(; By lawlolawl Updated May 05, 2012

It's a strange thing-- love.
Like plunging into a dark pit of the coldest waters and getting a sweet and tingling warmth.
How something that so beauiful can turn into the bitterest sensation of regret, of past and at the same time have the fear and anxiousness of the future.
The strangest thing about love, though, is that it knows no bounds and can prevail over anything and everything.

  • adventure
  • art
  • artist
  • baby
  • blood
  • chapter
  • class
  • cute
  • dad
  • death
  • disease
  • doctor
  • famous
  • fertility
  • first
  • grove
  • hatred
  • heart
  • hope
  • hunter
  • illness
  • jeanette
  • lawlolawl
  • loss
  • love
  • mara
  • melody
  • mom
  • morning
  • mother
  • mysterious
  • mystery
  • new
  • one
  • outbreak
  • paparazzi
  • prologue
  • risk
  • rosa
  • sad
  • sadie
  • school
  • secert
  • seven
  • sick
  • sight
  • sleep
  • son
  • sweet
  • teacher
  • tear
  • underground
  • vegetarian
  • venom
  • virus
  • wonder
GuruPushkin GuruPushkin Mar 02, 2012
- third paragraph: 
                              should be: "...kind ways..."
                              should be: "...planted seeds..."
                              -Fourth paragraph:
                              who said the quote? Cite it
                              
                              -This sounds so interesting. You writing is really good, sets a great tone:)
tosinwashere tosinwashere Mar 02, 2012
That was a proffesionally written prologue. Amazing flow.
                               No grammar errors. Voted.
lawlolawl lawlolawl Mar 02, 2012
@PurplePantsPower You're aawesome ;D I'm in love with grammar xD and thanks soooo much. Means the world and more to me :D haha I'm reading your story right away!
lawlolawl lawlolawl Mar 02, 2012
@CareeFreeGissay Thanks(: It's the only story I've ever written that I've truly wanted to finish... so I hope you keep reading :D
                              I'll read yours ^__^
CareeFreeGissay CareeFreeGissay Mar 02, 2012
The story shows so much potential. *Voted! You should keep writing this story and never stop it's going places! :D