Last Night on Earth

Last Night on Earth

409 Reads 10 Votes 5 Part Story
Silver_Moon005 By Silver_Moon005 Updated Oct 07, 2012

Carmen didn't want to move from the comfort of the skyscrapers and crowded streets that she grew to love, but when she finds her father cheating on her mother with his secretary, she has no choice. Stick this city girl in a small boring town like Poughkeepsie, and problems are bound to happen.

TrivStar TrivStar Mar 14, 2012
You have a really nice way of writing! Although, maybe you should spread out the descriptions more rather then putting them all at the beginning. You have really great grammar
SugarAndTea_ SugarAndTea_ Sep 25, 2011
I found this on shuffle and love it! I think you should write it some more
december_girl december_girl Dec 10, 2010
This is really really good :) I'm new on wattpad and it would be great if you could read my story: The Daughter
                              thanks & well done :)
Silver_Moon005 Silver_Moon005 Jul 28, 2010
This is my first story and i didn't really want to put this up. Tell me if you like it; it'll help me a LOT. Thanks.