Help Me

Help Me

442 Reads 16 Votes 5 Part Story
BlackandWhite1020 By BlackandWhite1020 Updated Mar 21, 2012

Fourteen years seems like such a short time sometimes, yet at others it's hard to believe fourteen years can contain so many events...  Thinking back...so many faces, so many victims, so much pain...  
There is the girl who calls herself Wolf, who fourteen years ago first Changed without a bite.
There is the man lost in a story of revenge, who fourteen years ago lost his family to a beast thought to be a part of mythology.
Their fate is to be intertwined again.

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BlackandWhite1020 BlackandWhite1020 Mar 09, 2012
@MissyJohannasen I dont mind advertisements, no worries.  Thanks for the suggestion and free read~
xWhiteLightning xWhiteLightning Mar 09, 2012
GOD!!!  The way the character thinks is very phenominally written.  THIS... IS...HOW... WEREWOLF STORIES...ARE...SUPPOSED...TO...BE...WRITTEN.  A fantastic read and I will not hesistate to go to the second chapter... well done.
KITTYkat1234 KITTYkat1234 Mar 07, 2012
I like the descriptions, but also think that you overuse the ellipses. It's an interesting way of thinking about a werewolf's perspective.
LostinthisWorld LostinthisWorld Mar 05, 2012
This is good and descriptive.  I love how you describe the thirst!
LiddySykes LiddySykes Mar 03, 2012
Omg so descriptive and touching :)
                              And interesting prologue :) It leaves the reader wanting more. 
                              *voted*