Afterwhere

Afterwhere

189 Reads 22 Votes 2 Part Story
Kimmy By kimathy Updated Mar 10, 2012

What do you do when you suddenly find yourself in a world between life and death? A misty limbo for those with unfinished buisness.

Kassie wasn't religious, she scoffed at ghosts and reincarnation, until she finds herself in their world. A duplicate of our universe, but covered in a light haze, and filled with the ghosts of people's last moments. For someone who's never had too many responsibilities, finding out she must help the ghosts in Afterwhere "move on" along with a band of other people, stuck, like her, is a crippling shock from reality.

  • afterlife
  • afterwhere
  • dead
  • death
  • fiction
  • ghosts
  • kassie
  • lit
  • living
  • teen
kaitlinhayes kaitlinhayes Mar 13, 2012
very very well written. creative and descriptive just like those in the movies.
kimathy kimathy Mar 13, 2012
@SongOfAutumn Thanks! I based their relationship off me and my sister's relationship! :]
Twilight_Arctic_Fox4 Twilight_Arctic_Fox4 Mar 13, 2012
This is an amazing story, and a great first chapter!!!!!
                              I love the description!!!!!!!!!! :D
whikerms whikerms Mar 13, 2012
You're very effective at maintaining a fast pace and keeping up the suspense. I also really like your title - good first chapter!
BochSquatty BochSquatty Mar 11, 2012
Awesome Beginning!!!! I love the detailed descriptions! Great word choice and the story just flows well! Keep it up! :D