The Things I Swore I'd Never Do

The Things I Swore I'd Never Do

425 Reads 20 Votes 1 Part Story
Kate By gracekay Completed

Some things will change. Other things never can. 

And the worst thing of all is that I still see myself in you.

  • bully
  • bullying
  • choice
  • highschool
  • loser
  • popular
  • popularity
  • regret
  • school
  • teenfiction
CossetteLeRose CossetteLeRose Feb 01, 2013
I love the blurb, just btw. Its so ...honest. Not alot of writers are willing to let their work be critiqued. They get easily offended. I also really like the story:D
MiniMoxx MiniMoxx Feb 01, 2013
This is very powerful, and I like the writing.
                              I think the formatting could do with some editing, and some grammatical errors, but nothing too much.
                              The writing though is very good. I enjoyed the read! :)
Snowflakexo Snowflakexo Jan 29, 2013
Wow, this is a really good plot. A lot of people will be able to relate to it, I'm sure. The words are just the way they need to be, simple yet powerful. Great job.