Some things will change. Other things never can.
And the worst thing of all is that I still see myself in you.
I love the blurb, just btw. Its so ...honest. Not alot of writers are willing to let their work be critiqued. They get easily offended. I also really like the story:D
This is very powerful, and I like the writing.
I think the formatting could do with some editing, and some grammatical errors, but nothing too much.
The writing though is very good. I enjoyed the read! :)
Wow, this is a really good plot. A lot of people will be able to relate to it, I'm sure. The words are just the way they need to be, simple yet powerful. Great job.