Obsolete

Obsolete

122 Reads 4 Votes 4 Part Story
Ireth_Sapphire By Ireth_Sapphire Updated Mar 10, 2014

"I was frustrated. With myself, for crying over something simple, for giving up. With Jasper, for looking at me like he did. With my body, for never being what I wanted."

Elise is the girl you pass in the hallway and do a double take. Stoic, tall, elegant. Confident. People often assume she's a model, just judging by her looks, stature, and attitude. Little do they know, all they are seeing is a front she puts up. Only her friends know the real her.

Ireth_Sapphire Ireth_Sapphire Aug 08, 2012
@makeup_isnt_beauty thanks! The next xhapter will b out today, actually :) btw, I <3 ur name!!
emmiebar5 emmiebar5 Aug 08, 2012
I just read this & I really liked it! (And not just because I love Zac Efron lol) 
                              The only advice I have is to make a new paragraph after each person speaks, it just kind of makes the writing neater. But otherwise it was flawless! Voted :)