Icarus-Incarnation

Icarus-Incarnation

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challenge647 By challenge647 Completed

DIVOT
    Careful Icarus, for the sun is hottest at it's zenith and the ripples end when they meet the shore. The words "I can" rings loudest, when we ask why for. Great piece of inspirational writing. Sounds like your up for the challenge. "
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     CHALLENGE647
    I have no need to be hesitant Daedalus! I shall acquire this monster Sol and you shall all see, what an illusion the Sun can be. Maybe your ripples end at the shore, being nothing more. But mines, repetitious with ease, will keep until the "I cannot" has ceased.
    
    LOVED YOUR REMARK (or insult)  It was very clever and original! ^^
    
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    :) WHAT SOMEONE REPLIED TO MY POEM(on another site), THOUGHT I SHOULD SHARE WITH YOU ALL

challenge647 challenge647 Aug 10, 2012 09:06PM
@nicollettenikki THANKYOU ^__^ sorry for replying so late :O
This is very mythical and mystically dreamy to me. Its just so whimsical and lighthearted and enlightening and the visuals are so exciting! This was superb.
Dip076 Dip076 Jul 23, 2012 09:56PM
This poem is really unique and I love greek mythology so I guess that's why I was 'blown away'. Anyway, the words were really used well and I loved the words you used. I can see you're inspired here so well done :D
challenge647 challenge647 Jul 07, 2012 10:54PM
@wordsinmysoul2 lol OHH GOSH "poetic devices" :P No such a thing!! I just felt it and it came is all but really my inspiration was shakespear and well greek mythology (lol not that youd care =.=)
She_Writes She_Writes Jul 07, 2012 02:46PM
This is great work! The old English and the depth of the meaning really amazes me. I love the fact that you've used so many poetic devices in here....lovely! Well done =D
challenge647 challenge647 Jun 08, 2012 08:36PM
@TashFisher  :) You have different tastes, so understandable lol