Hello, these are some crappy short stories and poems. I suck at writing...beware.
@LOLndSMILE Thanks! I was actually thinking about making this into a short story lol. I'm glad you like it :)
I kinda feel like it can almost be a story and not be a poem. But I really like it. It is written very *flowy* (not a word but should be) good job :)
I really like this poem, very sad but well written! :) I enjoyed reading it and I will deffinetley check out your other works :)
@Giraffe16 Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem:)
Wow this is very very amazing. I have to say your rhythm and beat was almost astonishing and the words blended perfectly to form into this fabulous poem. Although kind of dark. This poem is amazing!:-)