Forever and Always

Forever and Always

605 Reads 16 Votes 3 Part Story
Brittany By moonbeam520 Completed

(A short story) Why? Why do they keep trying to tear us apart? Bailey has been pondering this one question for the past two years of her relationship with Nathan. She's finally had enough. She will be with Nathan, and they can't stop her. She may be only seventeen, but it's time for her to make the "grown-up" decisions now.

caroline412 caroline412 Apr 25, 2012
Sad and happy at the same time. Great use of grammar, I love your use of detail, like "innocent white carpet" and your description of the meadow. Wonderful work. :)
ClaireLindsey ClaireLindsey Apr 20, 2012
wow I love it!!!! You are an amazing author! Please write more! I really like how you started off so intensely, then slowly reavealed the plot. This is really good!
                              read mine? :) *The Three days*
moonbeam520 moonbeam520 Mar 03, 2012
@jesusfreak3214 
                              Thank you so much, i really appreciate the comment :)