448 Reads 40 Votes 1 Part Story
Kailyn By KailynElyse Updated Feb 27, 2012

Have you ever wondered what would happen if history was changed?
That lies were told to cover up the mistake of someone? If so,
you were right.

Queen Cleopatra of Egypt - how did she really die? Read on to
discover the truth, if you dare.

A/N: I'd like to point out that this is a short story and I have no intention of turning it into a novel at the moment. Thank you for reading.

  • calliope
  • cleopatra
  • complete
  • fantasy
  • fiction
  • history
  • short-story
otradubai otradubai Oct 05, 2014
i love the way you describe how the characters are feelings or their surroundings
KailynElyse KailynElyse May 06, 2013
@andromeda79 Why thank you! That's so nice of you to say, you're too sweet <3
andromeda79 andromeda79 May 05, 2013
How is this not have more votes right now?! This is the BEST short story I have ever read. Your writing style is beyond beautiful.
beautyatwork beautyatwork Aug 17, 2012
The whole concept of this is unique. I like the vampire part of it. And I'm wondering how the gift from Cleopatra will help Calliope. Anyways, your writing is very vivid and beautiful. Please continue this.
HisBeautifulMess HisBeautifulMess Aug 17, 2012
I usually dont' read stories based on history but this is well done! I like the way you develop the chraracters well for us to know them better. The plot seems to be really original and seems to be a really promising story as well. Upload soon!
KailynElyse KailynElyse Aug 11, 2012
@chicblackglasses Aw, thank you! Actually, Calliope is a short story, though another short story is in the works.