Help me forget..

Help me forget..

172 Reads 10 Votes 3 Part Story
Edaina By itsFelixthecat Updated Jan 01, 2013

'Hi, I'm Mckenzie, 18, last year of college and self harming' I said

'Why?' A old lady asked with a warm smile.

'Reasons' I answered back harshly....

...She cant escape her memories; her past; but with the help of this guy, Chrame, could he help her move on..?

  • harmng
  • sad
  • scared
  • self
  • weak
LaraDevine LaraDevine Jan 01, 2013
Hey this story has potential. Only thing I would say is a few commas are missing before the closing speech marks! But your sense of dialogue is good, the characters are realistic and I'm sure you'll get lots of reads!
SuperBugsybunny SuperBugsybunny Jul 25, 2012
When is the next part of this story coming up it is really good! :)
firelipz firelipz Feb 28, 2012
it's good, i wanted to see safe house. have you seen it? was it good? and the end was kind of scary.