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Pen Your Pride
Another life

Another life

2.5K Reads 75 Votes 4 Part Story
jayne munns By jaynemunns Updated Jan 26, 2016

under construction

  • abuse
  • alcohol
  • blood
  • brother
  • cheat
  • cry
  • cut
  • death
  • friend
  • harm
  • hatred
  • high
  • hurt
  • kids
  • killed
  • kissing
  • love
  • miscarriage
  • monster
  • morning
TheEcstasy TheEcstasy Sep 29, 2012
It's really an emotionally charged story, which is always hard to do, but since it's an experience, it come across as being very honest. 
                              One or two minor points, probably typos, and nothing a quick once over won't fix! Keep it up, and good luck in your life. :)
Reincarnation3217 Reincarnation3217 Sep 29, 2012
I feel bad for him but way worse for you between him and your famil it most have been hard <3
XxCookie1999xX XxCookie1999xX Sep 29, 2012
This got me hooked up :) and the fact that it is a real story hooked me up more ! I will definitely keep an eye on it for the future !! (: <3
p3ngu1n4ever p3ngu1n4ever Sep 29, 2012
is this a true story? if seems very realistic and take that as a compliment!
lillyhudson lillyhudson Sep 28, 2012
True stories are usually always the most emotional ones. all I can really say is maybe break up that really big paragraph and that you are really comma happy. I'm not a grammar nazi but that's a lot of commas haha
Terra93 Terra93 Sep 28, 2012
Wow...true story? Its really emotional. I like how you want to help others and I'm 100% you will.
                              Looking forward to reading more..