Born to Protect and Kill anyone in my way.

Born to Protect and Kill anyone in my way.

2.1K Reads 55 Votes 8 Part Story
Gretchen By NikkyStorm Updated Dec 22, 2011

I’m a 18 year old girl that at first is a human and then a half vampire and half who the fuck knows. AndI am born or made to protect the life of a human boy that is important to the elder and the crown. The boy becomes to be a part of my life and I get connect to him. In doing so I face lots of test put on me by the elders. My best friend who a vampire is in love with me and is a big pain in the ass. But I can’t let him go his the reason I am alive. I have to make a  decisions that can change my life. But will i do what’s intelligent. Who know because I don't. Really I don’t know was going to happened to the two parts of my mess of a life that I love.

VenessaJinson VenessaJinson May 13, 2011
Wow! This is so unique and creative. I really liked it! Great job!!! I voted!
SMILEY99552 SMILEY99552 May 13, 2011
This is really good and I think that it should be on the 'what's hot list'!!
                              *voted*
MarineLynn MarineLynn May 09, 2011
*Voted
                              Keep it up.
                              Oh when the Point of View change. 
                              Can you put it so it is written
                              Nana's POV 
                              so we understand it's someone else's point of view~
                              ~Fishie
ACRL37 ACRL37 May 09, 2011
A good start! There are a few grammar errors, nothing that a quick edit can't fix, and this story has potential =) nice job! 
NikkyStorm NikkyStorm Apr 16, 2011
thanks it means a lot that u read it and ...Periwinkle is a color in the blue-violet family. lol @XxamoraXcarolinexX 
1nOnly 1nOnly Mar 30, 2011
This was good just needs a little up otherwise I enjoyed it.