Statue of the Hellwolf

Statue of the Hellwolf

387 Reads 2 Votes 1 Part Story
dennis smith By dennismennis13 Completed

a short story about a girl with imeserable faith

vantablack vantablack Feb 05, 2011
Not bad, but you need to capitalize the first letter of all of your sentences. 
dreamy_ dreamy_ Feb 05, 2011
hm, nice, but you have some grammar problems that you should work on I noticed you forgot to capatilize one of your sentances.
                              
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dennismennis13 dennismennis13 Jan 30, 2011
@TrevorWilloughby  im the author, i thought this up when i was bored in bed, and typed it up on my cell phone. 
TrevorWilloughby TrevorWilloughby Jan 30, 2011
Who is the author here? I like it. Did you write this outta your head DS or did someone else?
                              
                              I can't tell by reading the comments below who is speaking. I don't recognize the e-mail addresses.
dennismennis13 dennismennis13 Jan 19, 2011
@obsidianbutterfly13  thanx alot, i actually typed this up on my cell phone, so i havent gotten that far yet