a short story about a girl with imeserable faith
Not bad, but you need to capitalize the first letter of all of your sentences.
hm, nice, but you have some grammar problems that you should work on I noticed you forgot to capatilize one of your sentances.
Hey be sure to check out my story Despicable Us and comment telling me what you think! It's only a chapter so far.
@TrevorWilloughby im the author, i thought this up when i was bored in bed, and typed it up on my cell phone.
Who is the author here? I like it. Did you write this outta your head DS or did someone else?
I can't tell by reading the comments below who is speaking. I don't recognize the e-mail addresses.
@obsidianbutterfly13 thanx alot, i actually typed this up on my cell phone, so i havent gotten that far yet