Ethan's Goodbye ✔️

Ethan's Goodbye ✔️

425 Reads 48 Votes 3 Part Story
• Naomi • By -muffliato- Completed

Maybe if I had hadn't nudged him to his breaking point, I could've pulled him away.

  • brother
  • ethan
  • genderequality
  • goodbye
  • inspired
  • love
  • myyouth
  • plottwist
  • runaway
  • secret
  • shortstory
  • siblings
  • thirteenreasonswhy
  • wattys2017
brainfart_ brainfart_ Mar 31, 2017
This was so incredibly emotional, you have a wonderful style of writing
killerwolf49 killerwolf49 Jul 13, 2017
You have a great flow in your writing, and it all seems so real and vivid in my head. 
                              
                              This chapter is quite emotional, even if it may not seem like it, but it just adds more to Naomi's view, and has some issues as said in the previous comment with society. The pressures..
killerwolf49 killerwolf49 Jul 13, 2017
Society makes me really sad that it has this effect on people, and myself for the sake of sharing.
kayxcxxo kayxcxxo Nov 17, 2017
“Boys don’t cry”... that has to be one of the most ridiculous things ever and i don’t even know how some people could ever think that
stringofmoments stringofmoments Jul 07, 2017
I have literal tears in my eyes this is so sad and beautiful
kayxcxxo kayxcxxo Nov 17, 2017
okay so before this, i somehow just assumed the character speaking in this chapter was a guy but now i was obviously wrong