Don't deserve you

Don't deserve you

1.2K Reads 39 Votes 8 Part Story
Laurie Jane By LaurieJane4 Updated May 29

Lillian Eaton is Four's little sister. He left her to go to dauntless, left her with Marcus. For two years, she honoured her brothers wishes by keeping her head down and obeying her father's every command. She takes the beatings without protest, but one day she snaps. She hits her father back and storms out of the house. She sneaks out often to hang out with her dauntless friends, Uriah, Lynn, Marlene and Zeke who teach her to fight. Her father soon learns that if he hits her, she hits him back. Lillian transfers to dauntless, where she catches the eye of a certain blue eyed leader...
(Inspiration for this was the song " don't deserve you by plumb)

  • abnegation
  • amity
  • betrayal
  • books
  • bravery
  • candor
  • dauntless
  • divergence
  • divergent
  • eric
  • ericcoulter
  • eriudite
  • fandoms
  • fanfiction
  • love
  • tobias
  • tris
  • wattys2018
EleanoraMedici EleanoraMedici Apr 03, 2017
I cant wait to see you grow as a writer. Never give up 😃 one had to start somewhere 😇