The Pastor's Daughter

The Pastor's Daughter

639 Reads 23 Votes 1 Part Story
Michelle By ReinaStar Completed

An 8-page romance story written for a competition. An extended version is available in the episodic book, "Riven Anderson: Actor for Hired."

  • actor
  • daughter
  • love
  • pastor
Nyxis87233 Nyxis87233 Jun 04, 2012
I really hope that you do the extended story thing. While the outcome might be the same, I would still love to read it. It all about the journey, really. Love the title, by the way, fits the story perfectly! Loved it!
BeautifullyAwkward BeautifullyAwkward Mar 04, 2012
@ReinaStar 
                              Omg, cool title! And I'll make sure I check it out! :D
BeautifullyAwkward BeautifullyAwkward Mar 03, 2012
Just finished reading this! This is great! Deserves way more reads!added to my top ten! :3
BeautifullyAwkward BeautifullyAwkward Mar 03, 2012
Page two: 
                              OKAY, one thing I don't get is, if her brother wants her to experience true love, than how can it be true if you're:
                              1.) Paying someone to date them 
                              2.) They're an ACTOR! XD
                              Shady stuff. Anyways, onto the next page! ^_^
TigerBee TigerBee Mar 03, 2012
Wow, it was quite an interesting read. On page five, you've written quite a few numbers which are below 100. If it is, then write 'em in alphabetical words and not numerals. 
                              
                              Good job. :3
Hello_Sweetie Hello_Sweetie Mar 02, 2012
This is a short story and I realize that but it is little too short even for a short story. I agree with everyone else and more can definately be added. It can still be a short story because you don't want to drag it out too much. So kudos to you for doing such a great job with this little story :)