Pete and Daisy

Pete and Daisy

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TaniHanes By TaniHanes Updated Sep 10

🌼shortlisted for Wattys 2017🌼
🌹Wattpad Featured Story🌹
  He needs a place to live, she needs a baby daddy. 
    Pietro Santangelo and Marguerite White are students at prestigious Columbia University in New York City. She is a fun-loving, free spirit who finds herself in a bit of a familial bind, he is an exchange student with a chronic case of poverty. They concoct a plan that they think will work, not realizing how much changes with two simple words...
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  Pete merely looked at her and opened a box of books. He took some out and began placing them on the shelves, bending and stretching at his task. He had a nice back, broad shoulders and muscles that could be seen clearly under his light blue T-shirt.
  Daisy watched for a minute, fascinated.
  "Like what you see?" he asked without turning around.
  She jumped at the sound of his voice. "Well, you're the only thing in the room that's moving, you know?" she said by way of explanation.
  He turned around to look at her, books in either hand, a small grin on his face. "Of course, what was I thinking?" he asked rhetorically. "And look. We're both adults here, hm?" He looked carefully at her. "The couch we just brought up here cost fifty dollars at the second-hand store, and has to be at least thirty years old. I don't want to sleep on it, and I don't think you're going to want to sleep on it, either."
  She shook her head.
  "So the bed is nice and big," he continued. "I think we can manage, don't you? We can share the bed." He watched her for her reaction. "I give you my word this is not going to be a problem for me. At all. Is this going to be a problem for you?"
  She looked at him. "Really? At all?" She recovered from the unintentional meaning of his words quickly. "No, it won't be a problem for me, either," she said firmly. "We can share the bed."
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  **Warning: Mature Content**
  Many thanks to @rentachi for the lovely cover!

user21492926 user21492926 2 days ago
Third-person omniscient is supposed to be quite restrictive while telling a story, isn't it?
                              All the characters introduced into the story are explained from a distance.
                              I'd love to try it once I've gained experience. I think second person narrative would be interesting also. Very difficult to write.
Tiscon Tiscon 6 days ago
Spelling and grammar errors, huh?! This book is precious. I'm sure it's  going to be great( and I've only read the prologue).
user21492926 user21492926 2 days ago
I often feel like I'm being offensive pointing out typos etc.
nippleglitter nippleglitter 5 days ago
i read baby daddy and clicked faster than my own eyes could process sorry
BlackHood5533 BlackHood5533 5 days ago
Guys... we're all officially related officially related to Levi. We're all super badass and we can live off of 2 hours of sleep or less!!! Yeah!
PandaReader PandaReader 2 days ago
This has been in my recommended for so long I decided to read it